People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this?
Nowadays, due to hectic schedule people are not providing their full attention on their diets and physical exercises which leads to lots of perilous ailments. Moreover, that is the reason humans in present day never more fits and healthier as compared with earlier periods. However, there are uncountable complications such as busy work life and eating continuously unhygienic meals along with measures like government organise campaigns, schools motivate pupils to take part in games, sports as well to tackle these hurdles.
The main factor of this perception is that why a huge number of masses are enduring from obesity is that in present days people have hectic schedule. In addition to this, it is reality that everyone in today’s era are running cat run after wealth to earn more bread and butter so that is why they spend a couple of times on their offices. For example, if people expend much of time at their workplaces so they will not have time for any activities also, they are not going to care for whether their meals are healthy or not. On the other hand, the another major concerning area is that today a vast amount of fast food varieties are available in markets which easy to prepare within minutes as well as delicious in taste. Moving further, humans have taken these unhealthy food items to satisfy the buds of their taste without any fears of fattens which makes them physically weak.
Nevertheless, there are various solutions to solve these obstacles and an initial is that regime should arrange camps to inspire humans about healthy lifestyle. Furthermore, authorities can print pamphlets of health tips and exercise descriptions to an educate masses about these. Apart from this, government also warn people about detrimental disease which increases dramatically to eat junk foods at big levels and give negligible time to regular workouts. In other words, an educational centres not only in courage students to play sports but also serve healthy and nutrition foods at their school canteens which beneficial for children. For instance, schools organise sport competitions and offer prizes to winner pupils that is why in the greed of rewards a majority of students definitely join the sports to make better in these.
In conclusion, although, people’s unhealthy lifestyle and bed habits of consuming sealed foods make them obese. Apart from this, it’s vastly chances leads to heart attacks and another several ailments but if some integer steps can be taken than it will be solved at big level. Beside that, it is crucial for masses to do daily outdoor activities and give proper care to their dietary to keep own them fit and healthier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...esent day never more fits and healthier as compared with earlier periods. However,...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ealth tips and exercise descriptions to an educate masses about these. Apart from this, go...
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Line 9, column 491, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'centre'?
Suggestion: centre
...orkouts. In other words, an educational centres not only in courage students to play sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2256.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 443.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09255079007 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57312778613 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591422121896 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.2725746771 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6875 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5625 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163131672203 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494037311637 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431802355577 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101148510754 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504520675765 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.