People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
there are many reasons for an individual to participate in higher educational institutions. I believe that it's upon personal choice, where they feel comfortable to study its up to their own decision.
for instance, some students might want to have a commercial job, so commerce background would be preferable for them to build an amazing career in later on graduation.
but others may choose the university as it provides vast opportunity for their pupils.majority of the highly reputable varsity offers research facilities thus one can achieve their desired survey done. attending college is considered to be one of the most crucial decisions of a person’s life. there are several reasons why people decide to embark on university life/college life. college enables people to develop their intellect, gain new experiences and earn respect in the society.
most people believe that in order to be successful they need to earn a degree first. In the past, a college education was not a crucial necessity to get a job. If you worked hard enough and had connections, you could find a job with little difficulty. Nowadays, the world has become more competitive and demanding. people need not only work experience, but also a good education to be able to find a decent job. young people understand this and are willing to prepare themselves as well as they can to ensure their place in the workforce.
Another reason why people decide to go to college is that they want to enhance their perspectives. By having new experiences, young people can better comprehend how the world works. Usually, students need to face different types of situations at college such as working in teams, making presentations, speaking in public, and many more. All these assignments are designed to get you out of your comfort zone and make you experience an unfamiliar situation. Therefore, the best place to prepare yourself for the real world is college. Parental pressure is another factor that encourages students to go to college. The fear of disappointing them forces many youngsters to join college. young people want to live up to their parents’ expectations, and they will go to any extent to make them happy.
In conclusion, there are many factors that may influence a person’s decision to attend college, but the most important one is the fear of not being successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16923076923 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9667054493 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1603176022 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6363636364 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290448134696 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767691588027 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582440574495 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129205885169 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691554128204 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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