People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, population prefer to live in metro cities due to various reasons such as, education, their own techie jobs or just to get perks of technologies. But though people have luxurious lifestyle in these cities, they certainly face many issues in their daily routine. Below essay will elucidate the problems and the actions which government should take to motivate people to move out of cities.
First, one of the major issues, people come across in the cities is air pollution. It leads to many respiratory diseases like Asthma and Lung cancer. They have a sedentary lifestyle nowadays, which turns down to a lack of exercise. This increases the possibility of spinal diseases or back pain issues. Secondly, most of the children and parents have a busy schedule in cities. They hardly bother about a healthy diet. Ready-made meals and junk food affect the health enormously in a long run. Additionally, there is a huge burden on the government to provide the best facilities in cities to maintain the living standards.
Therefore, I reckon that Government should inspire population to settle in regional towns rather than in big cities. But it should try to develop those towns in terms of important facilities. It will help to reduce the load on big cities in terms of provisions, for example, housing, water supply, roads, health care. It will not only help to decrease the environmental concerns but also a stress, which people experience due to busy life.
In conclusion, it is a good option to motivate people to move in small towns until unless they can get benefits of the stable as well as healthy lifestyle.
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... to hunt the jobs in nearby locations. Secondly, the population, especially fro...
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...s, but also can live a luxurious life. However, there are some disadvantages of...
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...cal restrictions on immigration laws. In conclusion, though immigration proces...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49027237354 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06711059566 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0405682083 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764905152847 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225446797282 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390444359744 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442687134793 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247210099187 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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