Nowadays, most of the population try to buy unnecessary things, which are neither useful in long run nor affordable, sometimes pushing themselves into debts. Below essay will elucidate some of the main reasons behind this human mentality. Also, it will discuss precautions need to be taken by people to avoid this problem.
First, one of the important causes is, people live in this era where, they want to follow recent trends booming in the market. Social medias and advertisements make a big influence to give a hand for the same. Also, they want to make a show-off of these materialistic things. For instance, people don’t feel happy about their small car or a house. If a neighbor buys a costlier car or house than them, they will surely feel unsatisfied about themselves.
Secondly, people, especially youngsters don’t plan their expenses in advance. Rather they spend their money on redundant things carelessly. They fail to foresee the eleventh-hour emergencies which may come across such as medical problems of old people in the family or education loans for children etc. It eventually let them sink to plethora of debts.
To avoid such panic situations, one must be aware about yearly budgeting and its benefits. It will certainly prohibit people to buy unnecessary things. For example, while going to a shopping at the mall, though marketing strategies work excellent nowadays, we must carry the list of groceries and other materials which we need to buy there. Additionally, people should realize their own and family’s needs rather than squandering on flamboyant things. It will save their hard-earned money for their futuristic needs.
In conclusion, despite having numerous distractions in today’s world, people must be cautious enough while spending the money on things. Certainly, it will help them to plan to invest it carefully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22408026756 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78994723073 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0834039635 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2105263158 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237986599969 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682005952116 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517521243366 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127034029391 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363835909672 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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