People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, population prefer to live in metro cities due to various reasons such as, education, their own techie jobs or just to get perks of technologies. But though people have luxurious lifestyle in these cities, they certainly face many issues in their daily routine. Below essay will elucidate the problems and the actions which government should take to motivate people to move out of cities.
First, one of the major issues, people come across in the cities is air pollution. It leads to many respiratory diseases like Asthma and Lung cancer. They have a sedentary lifestyle nowadays, which turns down to a lack of exercise. This increases the possibility of spinal diseases or back pain issues. Secondly, most of the children and parents have a busy schedule in cities. They hardly bother about a healthy diet. Ready-made meals and junk food affect the health enormously in a long run. Additionally, there is a huge burden on the government to provide the best facilities in cities to maintain the living standards.
Therefore, I reckon that Government should inspire population to settle in regional towns rather than in big cities. But it should try to develop those towns in terms of important facilities. It will help to reduce the load on big cities in terms of provisions, for example, housing, water supply, roads, health care. It will not only help to decrease the environmental concerns but also a stress, which people experience due to busy life.
In conclusion, it is a good option to motivate people to move in small towns until unless they can get benefits of the stable as well as healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95604395604 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.674348915 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9523804148 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198227080493 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527646303361 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501333409053 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115146890843 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655112323206 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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