People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Life in the big city comes with its perks and disadvantages. Due to an increase in urbanization since the 19th century, individuals are deemed to encounter various issues on daily basis. These could be traffic jams, overcrowding at places, and even noise pollution. The government could endorse people to move to regional towns, but at what cost? This essay will discuss the different kinds of problems faced by an urban dweller on day-to-day basis, and what challenges the government would face in trying to move the crowd to surburns.
City life could get hectic and even become problematic for most people due to factors such as traffic, overpopulation, and load noises. Usually when the working hours end, and people are planning on going back home, the rush hours begin and that leads to jams on the road. It is found by studies that a person, who lives in the city, wastes about one-third of his life stuck in traffic. This situation not only takes up precious time but also distorts mind peace, due to unnecessary honking at other cars, load music playing in certain vehicles, and even if one is able to avoid this, and tries to enjoy by going out to parks, and clubs, the large number of people present at those places already leads to frustration. For example, if a person wishes to relax with his family in the park, but due to the crowd, is not even able to find a place to sit, such events are not pleasant. Hence, life in the city has many problems and they somehow seem to keep on increasing.
The idea of government trying to uplift the crowd from the urban to the surburn or regional areas seems like a solution to the problems of the city life, however, there are many important factors that needs to be considered first. The whole movement of urbanization happened in the first place was due to poor facilities available in such areas, with lack of proper hospitals, and educational institutes. If the government wishes to populate regional towns, they must develop such advance facilities that are already present in the modernized cities, so that people who are fed up with the city life are able to migrate to the suburbs with no fear of being at a loss in terms of lifestyle.
In conclusion, there are many difficulties that have risen in the following years in the cities, which have led to both mental and physical ambiguities for all. Modernization of regional cities could be considered as one of the solutions for these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...king hours end, and people are planning on going back home, the rush hours begin and tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, third, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73488372093 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57586249713 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7104766977 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224096999269 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742781392213 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563764478775 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134001265164 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148140039758 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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