People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
It is witnessed that citizens nowadays are likely to confront a range of problems when living in developed cities. While pollution is the major problem for this tendency, I completely agree that encouraging these people to live in regional towns is an ideal solution.
On the one hand, the main reason that pollution has become a serious concern among people is due to the stream of heavy traffic. This is because private vehicles usually emit toxic gases such as carbon dioxide and other compounds into the atmosphere, which have a negative impact not only on people’s health but also on the environment as a whole. Taking Vietnam as an example, where motorbikes make up 80% of all vehicles on the streets. Consequently, people are easily prone to various potential health issues related to the respiratory system.
However, to tackle this issue, I believe that authorities should implement a relocation strategy to attract the attention of people who want to live in suburban areas. This solution is beneficial for reducing the density of population in a particular area, hence, it would subsequently reduce the number of vehicles. Furthermore, this solution is also meet the people’s requirements for providing housing areas. This is the case because those, who experience a shortage of living spaces, would find it extremely difficult to live a decent life and feel a sense of satisfaction. In contrast, if people have a chance to live in a spacious and tranquil environment, their living conditions will be incredibly improved.
In conclusion, people living in developed cities could inevitably face serious problems such as pollution, which adversely affects their living conditions. However, by taking the mentioned solution, I believe that their problems would be minimized.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3298245614 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94960232803 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0947143273 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302097863002 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09725889414 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722183935509 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181910852056 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604748287678 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.