People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
In recent days, more population has shifted to city area as they have many facilities there around them. However, it has caused vital number of problems. I believe, government should encourage people to shift for the rural area in some extent to minimize these problems.
Firstly, It is inevitable that the citizens who live in city area mainly consider the convenience they receive when commuting to the work places and the schools. They highly consider the less time spend to reach there in everyday life. However, this caused traffic congestion as the cities crowded at the peak time with many people and vehicles. Secondly, when the area has large number of population makes lack of spaces to live. For instance, because of the land value is high in city area people are compact in the houses with little space.
Government should encourage people to shift for the regional area to minimize these problems. Living in regional towns are more cost effective compared to the cities. States can enhance the facilities by develop highway roads, improve the road condition which can stimulate convenient traveling. What is more, the life in rural area is full with fresh air where cannot find in cities. So the citizens live in remote places are not suffering from the pollution in the roads by fumes. Recent research done at Colombo University reveals road pollution in Colombo is five times than in rural places, which is harmful for the health.
To conclude, citizens in large cities experienced many problems at their day today lives including traffic congestion and lack of spaces. To tackle these problems, government should encourage them to move for rural area and the facilities there should be developed towards a comfortable life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45848781294 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6919548701 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247474097343 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818117638285 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590497685284 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159721804603 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416348689457 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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