Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often argued that the history is not much more important to the today’s society as it has outdated now. Although, history is belonging to the past, I believe the past things also valuable as it portrays the culture and the ethical values. Thus, I partly agree with this notion.
First and foremost, history was the very first beginning of the present achievements. Past generation had sacrificed more with a minimum level of facilities at the old days towards fulfillment of present day achievements. For example, most of the scientific research have oriented based on past findings. Secondly, old moments are the time of the custom derive where people learn languages, ethical values and the achievements as well as the failures. Those are being good lessons for today.
It cannot deny that the present time have vital benefits as it is almost towards future goals and findings. Therefore large number of people relies on mostly with the present time considering the past has already gone. Nevertheless, history is the time that people cannot change anymore. So it is worthwhile to concern more on current time and having targets for the future goals. For instance, recent research has found people are more likely to forget their things belong to the past and rely more on recent experiences.
To conclude, I believe that the old time is important to shape up humans lives even it has outdated today. The culture and the believes where we received from our ancestors are ever worthwhile
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...most towards future goals and findings. Therefore large number of people relies on mostly...
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Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d from our ancestors are ever worthwhile
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04780876494 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6136915711 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537848605578 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6235089059 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124328067066 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432480552972 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02966037319 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706658679464 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349513453399 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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