People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Large cities are filled with so many people from different ethnic and religious believes. it is paramount that people who intend to leave in big cities state their goals and objectives and ways to deal with thier daily challenges. Some of the issues faced by people in big cities includes;
1. Noise pollution
2. Poor environmental sanitation
3. Lack of sufficient jobs
4. air pollution from industrial emissions
5. increase crime rate
6. road traffic
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Every huge achievements started from little beginnings. The Government should encourage people to leave in smaller cities so that they can build it to what they want. this will encourage even distribution of people to other areas and as well foster development. this encouragement can be done by providing adequate amenities in small cities, building companies, contracting good roads, and providing job opportunities so that people can have reasons to leave in this areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 149.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41610738255 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88229075563 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711409395973 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0560743266 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4166666667 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240001506872 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661066778093 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833405407123 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654952912847 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936997101071 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.