People nowadays change careers and place of residence very often. Is it a positive or negatiive development
Nowadays, it is a major topic of concern that people have tendency to alter jobs or living places frequently. Whether it has less-than-desirable effects or caused detrimental consequences is a controversial issue. In my opinion, the changing is beneficial in some ways.
First, it is obvious that the movement would bring people more opportunities and challenges. It allows individuals to expand their vision and gain deeper insight into humanity. As an asian, for example, moving to a European country is a golden chance to discover new culture,to be blown away by the breath-taking landscape, to get acquainted with and find his feet in the native speaking environment. Apparently, the decision to shift living place is of necessity for whom has burning desire in experiencing and discovering.
Moreover, in terms of occupation alternation, the lack of motivation can be the culprit of it. For any job, we are required to be creative and enthusiastic, but the low salary or not being recognized has exaggerated the burden of the employees. Thus, they want to find another job that can be more suitable for them in long term. This would enhance an economic growth if the workers find more satisfaction and become more productive when changing occupation
This is not to say that this trend is absolutely positive. For instance,the regular shifting in job may caused the instability in the labour market as well as individual company. People would have to tackle with new troubles while starting over. However, they will also have more experiences and eventually make greater contribution.
In conclusion, I believed that the decision definitely depends on the individual. However, for people who has a deep passion for experiencing or seeking their real value, changing is never worthless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23263888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14957734954 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621527777778 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4816136699 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778671054945 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263717310013 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329530097612 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490992787367 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292503660538 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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