Some people think that the technology makes life complex, so we should make it simplier without usinh the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowsaday, how technology has influenced people’s life is a major topic of concern. Whether technology has made our life complicated in some ways has caused heated debate. While some people state that we should end up using it, I still strongly believe its benefits are far more significant.
First, it is obvious that with the widespread of using Internet, people can gain more access to information than ever before. Just by a click of mouse, people are able to peak their curiosity of every events happening in the world simultaneously. With the development of computer technology, searching knowledge via database or reading e-books by electronic devices is easier than ever. Apparently, technology is of necessity in our lives.
Moreover, technology would be beneficial for housewives in terms of household chores. In other words, it helps them ease the burden of housework by inventing advanced household appliances. Some decades ago, for example, people found it more challenging to complete a cooking process of peeling, dicing, mixing and reheating the food. However, it has been much more convenient in recent years by virtue of microwave oven.
That is not to say that technology does not have negative impact. the invention of Internet and devices like computers and mobile phones has been followed by the appearance of modern crimes, thus, people’s life may be exposed to a lot of dangers. These days, people using social media like Facebook would have a high chance of being privately infringed and hacked, resulting in the loss of personal information and private property. But social media is innovated day by day in order to avoid the unwanted consequences.
In conclusion, despite some problems caused by the technology, people’s life has been improved in several aspects thanks to it. Whether the technology would negatively or positively influence us, the key is actually lies in the users themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pos;s life is a major topic of concern. Whether technology has made our life complicate...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...ample, people found it more challenging to complete a cooking process of peeling, dicing, m...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...chnology does not have negative impact. the invention of Internet and devices like ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2783171521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92866133508 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618122977346 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3025540772 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9411764706 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158275236417 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480516453276 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386291762714 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896528174032 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504681213713 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.