People who do not use social media networks will always fall behind in career development opportunities.
To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?
Nowadays, networking is the paramount in business therefore the people who are not keep it will experience remainder and the social media is the main way to improve it. This happen will discuss in this essay.
On my point of view in one side, the biggest problem in work field is networking where this is a connector to bring the people running in success. For example, when one of the people have graduated then start to establish business in sale, he need several relations from kinds of seller and people who will help him to promote his products as well as the one way to share the products is via online, about this point is social media. As result, the networking have many benefits in business where to increase it need large relationship in social media. In conclusion, it will good chance when the people join in several organization especially in online social.
On the other hand, the advertisement frequently gives negative effect in society. There are several think which are happen today caused by the social media. The first, some information showed on internet about relation work and ask to people pay the registration where this site is not valid. Secondly, the people who commit offence on internet utilize it to cheat the others. In addition kinds of criminal via online is increase today and it is influence the people who use the internet as their track of business. Finally, it is becoming warning to communities to use social media carefully in order to avoid the crimes which are offered in types of site.
To sum up, the networking is important in business field because have many advantage of it despite the relationship will grow up the success of businessman but there are some negative effects of it that need pay attention.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun organization seems to be countable; consider using: 'several organizations'.
Suggestion: several organizations
...ill good chance when the people join in several organization especially in online social. On the o...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...iety. There are several think which are happen today caused by the social media. The f...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...rnet utilize it to cheat the others. In addition kinds of criminal via online is increas...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...mportant in business field because have many advantage of it despite the relationship will gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83168316832 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58302644555 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498349834983 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7450933983 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224304863335 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834560153341 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375750252839 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141118557645 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524606789851 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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