In the present time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and their public status which is different to the past, that is determine by values like honor and kindness. Personally, I totally disagree with the above statement.
The first reason is related to the human natures on their judgement of the people around them. The attitude seems to be the most important attribute a person could have, which will help in their living. People that are kind to other will receive the same treatment if they would get into any hard situations. It is the same for those chose to be loyal but the difference is that person who you wish to respect mush have a good personality and leading skill, otherwise this won,t benefit you in any ways, and even cause you more trouble.
Another reason could be seen when their consequences catch up with their bad attitude which could be and hard to tackle. The after effects are that these people will certainly gain less respect and loyalty or targeted as a burden in workplace or their heritage. This usually apply to rich and powerful people such as politicians, president and kind in which their mindset and attribute would have a massive impact on the country.Other occupations like doctors, nurse or even a farmer should try their best to impersonate their fellows or their friend.Even thought they are not rich or popular, they should certainly gain much respect despite their social class.
In conclusion, most people are aware of other's personality and values which are still deep-rooted in their brain since their part. Such value like kindness, loyal and generosity will certainly have an impact on their daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned opinion.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... present time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nt time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and their ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...which is different to the past, that is determine by values like honor and kindness. Pers...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...the human natures on their judgement of the people around them. The attitude seems to be the most impo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this chose' or 'those choses'?
Suggestion: this chose; those choses
...any hard situations. It is the same for those chose to be loyal but the difference is that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...ty and leading skill, otherwise this won,t benefit you in any ways, and even cause...
^^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Other
...ld have a massive impact on the country.Other occupations like doctors, nurse or even...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...personate their fellows or their friend.Even thought they are not rich or popular, t...
^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... their daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentione...
^^^^
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ir daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned ...
^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned opinion.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96632996633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53199100938 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9155045093 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137685685092 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607962268884 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422143068784 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974684671219 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312347577741 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
... present time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nt time, how much worthy a person is is depend on their valuable possession and their ...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'determined'.
Suggestion: determined
...which is different to the past, that is determine by values like honor and kindness. Pers...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...the human natures on their judgement of the people around them. The attitude seems to be the most impo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this chose' or 'those choses'?
Suggestion: this chose; those choses
...any hard situations. It is the same for those chose to be loyal but the difference is that ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , t
...ty and leading skill, otherwise this won,t benefit you in any ways, and even cause...
^^
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Other
...ld have a massive impact on the country.Other occupations like doctors, nurse or even...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...personate their fellows or their friend.Even thought they are not rich or popular, t...
^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... their daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentione...
^^^^
Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ir daily life despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned ...
^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
...despite their classes.Thus,I am totally disagree with the mentioned opinion.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96632996633 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53199100938 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9155045093 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.090909091 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137685685092 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607962268884 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422143068784 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974684671219 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312347577741 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.