(Phat) 2 Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, purchasing products such as books, air tickets or groceries online is becoming more common. From my perspective, I believe that this trend brings about more positives than negatives.
First of all, the argument worth noting here is that shopping online is time-saving. Instead of travelling long distances to the store and waiting in long queues to pay bills, people are able to easily select their favourite products at home and have them delivered to their house with just a few clicks. Furthermore, to address the situation of consumers buying items that are not acceptable such as ill-fitting clothes or faulty hardware, numerous online brands accept the return process at a prescribed time to fulfill the need of customers. While real shops may not accept this procedure, online shopping stores give consumers great satisfaction that they could experience through special policies. Finally, online shops provide a lower price than in real stores, for they are designing online selling programs to attract clients now. To clarify, a great number of promotional campaigns like discount codes or buy one get one for free were launched to appeal to purchasers; therefore, they feel that shopping has never been so profitable and opt for being loyal clients.
Admittedly, it appears that online stores would give poor customer service. For instance, several buyers find it difficult to contact online sellers or, occasionally, they reply hastily. Additionally, statistics have shown that frauds have happened due to cybercrime. Criminals could act as if they are trading goods to deceive shoppers into transferring money to them, thereby stealing sensitive information and hacking at credit card is feasible.
In conclusion, online shopping offers the public some great benefits, provided that individuals need to find well-known brands and be aware of potential dangers before buying anything online.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47811447811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74679796246 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680134680135 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7896662014 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130971202084 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049864366528 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736721374791 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967731307459 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101727449544 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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