Plastic shopping bags are used widely and cause many environmental problems. Some people say they should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, the environmental crisis in which we live has become a major concern for our society. It is undeniable that plastic goods are the main reason for this situation, thus a part of the population believes that the prohibition of plastic shopping bag is a necessary action to stop many environmental problems. Personally, I completely agree with this statement and this essay will discuss several reasons and provide examples supporting my idea.
To begin, the first reason for the need for banning plastic bags is the fact that they are dangerous for wildlife. To explain that, their light weight can make them travel all around the world and their appearance and shape can confuse several creatures which may consider them as their food. For example, almost 1.000 sea turtles find death eating white bags because they think that they are jellyfishes. Thus, the importance of minimizing the use of plastic bags is vital.
To continue, another reason is the fact that there are better alternatives available nowadays. Reusable bags have become a trend in the last 5 years. The image of people entering superstores holding them is very common since most of these bags can last for 3 years, in contrast with normal plastic bags. So, it is apparent that plastic bags will be obsolete in a few years.
To conclude, my opinion is that there is no place for plastic bags in the 21st century. Up until now, they had a devastating impact on the planet, however, has started to be reversed by a part of the population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: LIGHT_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lightweight'?
Suggestion: lightweight
...us for wildlife. To explain that, their light weight can make them travel all around the wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89312977099 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58587152474 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4219946588 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6153846154 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187922070237 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690375610459 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509497904557 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109707939932 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140087111256 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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