pollution is becoming a major environment problem what are causes and solutions to solve this problem

Nowadays, increasing pollution on roads is very harmful for environment. In this essay,i am going to discuss behind reason of this issue then some way to tackle this problem.

There are numerous factors responsible for this issue. To begin with, increasing number of cars are main reason for this problem. Nowadays people prefer to more and more own vehicles because they are comfortable for them. Increasing traffic on roads huge problem for environment. It leads to pollution on roads,which is not good for human beings as well as other creatures. Because these vehicles run on dizel,petrols . Furthermore, factories are second reason. Smoking is increased by factories,which pollutes our surroundings. Chemicals are created by them,which is harmful for humans.

There are some solutions can be taken to this trend. To commence with, people should use carpooling system. They should prefer pubilic transportation than own vehicles. Reducing cars will be great idea to safe our surroundings. Moreover, citizens ought to be much aware for our environment. They follow the rules,which are imposed by government. If they will be aware for environment conditions then they will keep safe their environment.

In conclusion,it is apparent from about discussion that there are plethora of reasons for this development. And it can be solve ,if masses are aware of their environment.

Votes
Average: 5.3 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44651162791 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06982847718 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.5937489496 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.55 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.75 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156155435892 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466680904541 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567925901483 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106661441673 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583288160433 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.15 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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