Some individuals consider that learning from books for getting knowledge better as compared to watching movies on and playing games on internet. I suppose that both factors are important for children.
To begin with, reading books is essential for children as they can aquire knowledge from books about different cultures and so on. For example,many books are related to cultures and rules about different countries. Also, it help to enhance the vocab of grammar. Reading books is great source to improve study skills. On the daily basis, they read a new word gain knowledge about them.
On the other hand, watching movies, playing games best source of entertainment. To commence with, often pupils exhaust after their school work they feel much tired. So in this situation these sources give them relaxation. Moreover, through the watching television they also achieve information about happenings, which being in their surroundings like news. Apart from this, playing games is essential part of children's life. They living healthy lifestyle if they play outdoor games.
In conclusion,it is clear from that both factors play a huge role in children's life. With this, they might be improve their mental and intellectual skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...from books for getting knowledge better as compared to watching movies on and play...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...ifferent cultures and so on. For example,many books are related to cultures and rules...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...les about different countries. Also, it help to enhance the vocab of grammar. Readin...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hey play outdoor games. In conclusion,it is clear from that both factors play a ...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s life. With this, they might be improve their mental and intellectual skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, apart from, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34358974359 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59534808642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0299110148 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4666666667 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235356758504 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805792523065 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774139911394 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156555724781 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784520219865 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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