Music play an essential role in our life. Nowadays, mostly juveniles like to hear music than news on radios. In this essay, i will discuss, wheather, it is positive or negative development also will give some reason then deduce my own opinion.
There are numerous advantages of this.To commence with, they listen folk, pop music also traditional music. Sometimes, these type of music are motivational for youth.It give them relaxation whenever they feel exhausted.So, this type of music get them energy. Moreover, listening radio is beneficial for adult.They can know about happenings which being in their surroundings also get lot of information about the world.
There are several reason of this trend.To commence with, advancement of technology had reduce trend of radio.Radio has become less popular.Young people prefer to listen only music than radio.Because, nowadays people have own mobile phones for entertainment also they watch news of whole world sitting in any corner of the city.That is why their less interest in radio.
In my opinion, radio has become less popular nowadays So, people should prefer to listen news of all world and gain knowledge about the crime on their personal gadgets instead of hearing music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33673469388 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72857600781 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.8215560253 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392615380695 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149360125537 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832881211637 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226944016199 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617532328403 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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