Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
The term Polygamy refers to men having more than one wives. The given topic asserts that is Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the country or not? In this essay, I will examine the possible solution and reasons for this phenomenon and discuss both in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, misunderstanding in between the couples is main reason to increase the divorce rate around the nation. However, sometimes family pressure on their childern for the marriages is also great reason. Moving further, there are also possible solution to this problem. Moreover, people have to participated in the awareness programs, camping programs and councling programs. Whereas, these programs are very benificial for illiterate people and ruler areas people. A recent survey conducted by Delhi university these type of awareness programs are very benificial for people and motivate to the people.
Secondly, community incourgement to increase the population also main reason to this issue. In addition to this, people for the sake of money do several marriages. Apart from that, government have to introduce laws and policies to the solution of this reason. Because, the government is the main body of every country ,and all laws are implement by the state. The best epitome of this is India Nation. Indian people are under the all policies, laws and rules of government.
In conclusion, we can say that if government make laws against that issue so people are also aware about this issue. Government plays very significant role in our life and people are under all the rules and laws of government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13358778626 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65136438759 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6367379767 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.1176470588 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187820001887 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618989984107 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902875605985 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12723596925 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120706256383 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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