Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
Polygamy is the culture of having more than one romantic relationship. This culture has not come into play recently. In ancient times, the kings had multiple wives. But later on this culture was frowned upon and monogamy became the common norm. Currently, this culture has made a comeback in the world. In my opinion, polygamy is one of the causes of divorce in today's scenario.
Firstly, the concept of marriage is a contradiction of polygamy. Marriage is a holy bond between two people who promise to be together during highs and lows of life. A person whose choice of relationship is polygamy cannot survive in a marriage where there is a constant commitment to one person for a lifetime. This directly contributes to the possibility of divorce. Polygamy is the equivalent of cheating in the marriage. A person having multiple partners while being married is no doubt cheating on their partner. This is a factor that leads to divorces and makes polygamy a weighing factor in divorce.
In my opinion, the solution to this problem is to avoid getting married when the preferred relationship style is polygamous rather than monogamous. It is not an obscure fact that a polygamous person stuck in a monogamous relationship is a threat to the relationship. This situation is similar to the situation when we avoid getting ourselves into things we are not ready for or do not like.
Concluding, polygamy is for sure a cause of the increasing divorce rates. This problem has only one solution that the polygamous people get involved with the other people who prefer the polygamous lifestyle otherwise there would be no honest relationships left and the divorce rates would keep on going higher.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0176056338 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83656866676 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2403810485 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113176549549 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379374168014 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446836124804 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692423281889 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369368071814 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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