Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the globe. Give possible solution and discuss the reasons behind the issue?
The term Polygamy refers to men having more than one wives. The given topic asserts that is Polygamy has lead to massive divorce rate around the country or not? In this essay, I will examine the possible solution and reasons for this phenomenon and discuss both in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, misunderstanding in between the couples is main reason to increase the divorce rate around the nation. However, sometimes family pressure on their childern for the marriages is also great reason. Moving further, there are also possible solution to this problem. Moreover, people have to participated in the awareness programs, camping programs and councling programs. Whereas, these programs are very benificial for illiterate people and ruler areas people. A recent survey conducted by Delhi university these type of awareness programs are very benificial for people and motivate to the people.
Secondly, community incourgement to increase the population also main reason to this issue. In addition to this, people for the sake of money do several marriages. Apart from that, government have to introduce laws and policies to the solution of this reason. Because, the government is the main body of every country ,and all laws are implement by the state. The best epitome of this is India Nation. Indian people are under the all policies, laws and rules of government.
In conclusion, Goverment should make laws againt this issue because it is very major issue. If state make policies and laws against this issue so people also follow that rules and regulations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63061957347 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.677329177 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5882352941 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200169355136 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645213337671 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890763788861 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133738819734 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115529445849 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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