Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasion are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is believed that sports play a vital role in uniting the people from all over the world and also it helps in reducing international stress. Moreover, this is the convenient way to express patriotism feelings too. To a certain point, I would agree with the thought but I personally believed that there are some negative impact are also there.
On the one hand, it is true that events like world cup, Olympia and other international sports events are an effective way to maintain the world peace and to show patriotism in a right way. It can be seen that before the start of the match, players or athletes shake their hands and wish them good luck, showing sportsmanship qualities. And during these moments, spectators can show their nationalism for their country and boosting confidence of the team or contestants by cheering them.
On the other hand, although the tournament effect positive on the world peace, but sometimes the athletes and supporters get carried away with their emotions. In certain cases, mainly in football and in cricket matches sportsman fought against each other because they could not bear their temperament, and also the situation lighten up the supporters to fight against each other as well. As a result, there will be dispute between the country as well. Therefore, it is recommended that players should give proper explanation about controlling the emotions during the match as it will have negative impact on the spectators and on the country too.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that football world cup and other international sports helps in easing international tensions and showing patriotism in a secure way, but I think it is important for athletes to have proper training to control their emotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0553633218 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73636578417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536332179931 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1912319268 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251062499852 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901792105545 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102458474287 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165062252749 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769283025489 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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