In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
Children are in such age of there life where it mean to fun and learn, but if they participate in some kind of work this will help into their own development. For the same point, some people claim that working in early age is completely wrong while others think that it is beneficial for children to learn and take responsibilities. According to me, I believe that work in such an early age lead to both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, if children are doing some work, it will help them to make independent and more responsible. Moreover, they get to know about the surroundings which ameliorate their skills. For eg. In European nations, children are engaged in part time works, from which they earn a small amount of money, but sufficient to fulfill their needs. Also, in many developed countries, it is mandatory for children to contribute their daily hours in some work.
On the other hand, if children are working in poor countries, then the scenario is different. For example, in India, children are being forced into work by their families because of many reasons like poverty and a lack of livelihood options or may be because of rural poverty and urban migration. And the most important thing to note that is, they are employed because they are cheap and pliable to the demands of the employee. Working in these conditions would have a risk of physical, psychological and many other negative impact on their development and health. However, Indian government and other organisation like UNICEF are working together to ensure that children are protected from work and exploitation.
In conclusion, I would say that, there are both negative and positive impact on children health and mind, depending on which circumstances they are engaged in work. The category of work is also important for the above factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94516129032 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76748814537 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5625436195 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346959801108 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118950713467 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859997938246 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2103303671 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716584359682 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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