Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Undoubtedly almost all people would like to be happy in their lives, but personal nature of individual happiness makes it more difficult to describe. However there are some basic needs that we all require to experience happiness.
Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. In general, nobody can totally happy apprehend the another person's emotions or feelings and we all have our own particular reasons to be happy. Some people, for example, get satisfaction from earning money or by achieving success, whereas for others, family and health are much more important. At the same point, there are many other feelings like excitement and peacefulness, that may be considered as the idea of happiness and the same person me feel happy in a variety of different ways.
Although it seems almost impossible to give precise definition of happiness, many people would agree that there are some basic perforce for achieving it. Firstly, it is very arduous for a person to be happy, if he does not have a proper place to live and enough food to eat. Secondly the greatest joy in life is only found by sharing experience with families and friends. Other key factors could be an individual freedom and maybe some purpose in life
In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it has different meaning for different person, but I believe that our basic needs like shelter, food and job need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, as for, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01204819277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66365897059 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5927008953 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19749250412 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793755585698 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620799103669 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120991520406 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345211196661 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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