Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Apparently,international sport competitions have become part and parcel in the present days. it is supposed to play an important role in boosting the relationship and mitigating conflicts among nations. From my point of view, I partly agree with this opinion.
On one hand,sport events held worldwide can help people to have a profound understanding of one another. In games like Football World cup or Olympics, there are a large number of competitors and teams who come from many different places and communities. During those contests, they will have chance to integrate into a multicultural environment which enables them to broaden their horizons regardless of religion. What is more, competitive games give both participants and supporters equal opportunities to expand
their circle of friends. For example, when players get involved in a certain kind of sport like badminton or tennis, they will have to compete with their opponents to win first prize. After the game, irrespective of the results, they may talk to each other and become good friends.
On the other hand, it does not rule out the responsibility that sporting occasions could give rise to diplomatic rows among countries. In some cases, competitors lose their head and their patriotic emotions possibly explode in an aggressive way, which does not make a good impression on fellow human beings. another negative side of popular events could be quarrels or even fights of supporters. when they think it terribly unfair for their teams to lose the game, riots may erupt and eventually have an adverse effect on the image of their countries.
In conclusion, although international sporting events have some certain disadvantages like somehow making relationships among nations worse, they will remain to be an embedded part of all time if people have proper attitudes towards others in public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in some cases, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32996632997 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04347678921 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0450090362 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172104537112 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565861400898 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418923254818 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091693534942 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230136789053 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.