The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of
the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the
fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the past two decades, female's position in the community has developed gradually. Myriad problems now experienced by younger generation like juvenile offend, which increase because most married women are working and they are not able to keep an eye on their children. Although there are other ways of growing criminal activity in children, I believe that women who cannot take care of their children lead children into such activities.
To begin with, some people who think that there are reasons for these issues. First of all, bad peer group is the responsible one. There are some groups at school and in a society, which turn good children into bad one. They do inappropriate activities that harm society and individuals as well. Thus, criminal activities in children rise because of their inappropriate friend circle.
Meanwhile, juvenile crime has escalated because of their working parents. The primary reason is that children are naive and vulnerable. When children are alone at home, they watch movies which show violence. As a result, children started to grasp things which they show in movies and do the same in society. Also, they do not have knowledge about what is wrong and right. Secondly, children are sensitive ones. They feel homesickness when there is no one around them to understand their feelings. In order to this, they do such crimes in stress and tension. To quote an instance, one survey has been done by WHO claims that 60% of juvenile crimes are done because they feel isolated. Ergo, these problems occur because women are not available at home for their children.
To conclude, some people deem that bad peer group is responsible for increasing juvenile crime. I, however, believe that improper care and lack of attention on children leads to crime.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09152542373 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52091281808 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552542372881 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6157117506 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158272759414 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486729608455 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056027288464 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102394552387 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475972688329 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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