Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization?
After industrialization, the merge of the global economy has embarked on the free movement of commodities from foreign society to regional shops and market. This has both benefits and harmful impacts on society as a whole.
As for the advantages, firstly, the countries of all status be it developed, developing, and under-developed can extract revenue by exporting goods. Moreover, it attracts new investment from home and abroad that can help plunge unemployment. Secondly, nations can import products that are abundantly available in another side of the world, on the contrary, is difficult to produce for geographical location, etc. such as oil is produced is the Middle East and other regions can import from them and establish a mutual relationship. Thirdly, globalization can offer customers myriads of options for the same requirements. This ensures commodity quality and competitive prices, as suppliers want to hold the market share.
If we come to talk about disadvantages, although globalization can help business flourish with investment, it can also kill local shops and markets at the same time. For instance, cosmetic commodity from the UK and the USA are accessible now-a-days in other developing countries. The upper-middle class people most evidently opt for a number of high definition range product which results in loss of market share forprovincial cosmetic industry. Besides, local products in numerous cases with its low budget cannot maintain the quality on the contrary the product from an established the brand can enter the market and due to the reputation of the name, it sells more and generate profit and at the same time can maintain quality.
In sum, it is said that despite some disadvantages in the introduction of new products in local market for native business owners, the overall impact of this phenomenon is impressive. To reduce the side effects of new policies to benefit the citizen's overs foreign products can be introduced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
After industrialization, the merge of the global economy has embarked on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as for, for instance, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32268370607 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0573293754 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594249201278 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2416995543 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12484343683 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422410421502 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382102390826 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832150048401 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035437274356 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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