Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization?
After industrialization, the merge of global economy has embarked the free movement of products from foreign countries to local shops and market. This has both benefits and harmful impact on society as a whole.
As for the advantages, firstly, the countries of all status be it developed, developing and under-developed can extract revenue by exporting goods. Moreover, it attracts new investment from home and abroad that can help plunging unemployment. Secondly, nations can import products that are abundantly available in other side of the world, in the contrary is difficult to produce for geographical location etc. such as oil is produced is middle east and other countries can import from them and establish a mutual relationship. Thirdly, globalization can offer customers with myriads of options for same requirements. This ensures products quality and competitive prices, as suppliers want to hold the market share.
If we come to talk about disadvantages, although globalization can help business flourish with investment, it can also kill local shops and markets at the same time. For instance, cosmetic products from the UK and the USA are accessible now-a-days in other developing countries. the upper middle class people most evidently opt for some high definition range product which results in loss of market share for local cosmetic industry. Besides, local products in many cases with its low budget cannot maintain the quality but the product from a established brand can enter the market and due to the reputation of the name, it sells more and generate profit and at the same time can maintain quality.
In sum, it is said that despite some disadvantages in introduction of new products in local market for native business owners, the overall impact of this phenomenon is impressive. To reduce the side effects new policies to benefit the citizens overs foreign products can be introduced.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
After industrialization, the merge of global economy has embarked the free...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to plunge' or 'plunge'.
Suggestion: to plunge; plunge
...ment from home and abroad that can help plunging unemployment. Secondly, nations can imp...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...w-a-days in other developing countries. the upper middle class people most evidentl...
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Line 4, column 542, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...intain the quality but the product from a established brand can enter the market ...
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Line 6, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers foreign products can be introduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, as for, for instance, such as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30819672131 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97035428336 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4439503605 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141553440455 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520757248994 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434359864825 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101385846703 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329544597697 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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