Present a written argument or case to an educated non specialist audience on the following topic Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money This practice can act as an incentive for

The industries are taking various steps to reward their workers for their extra-ordinary efforts for the development of the organizations. The most common practice of this taken by higher authorities is to provide incentives. This trend result in a satisfactory extent to encourage the staffs to put maximum efforts as well as to challenge themselves at the highest level. However, organizing of various award like best employer with profit share scheme may also exhibit as effective alternatives.

In order to recognize industrious effort from the employees, adding incentive according to various goal is a worthwhile practice. This trend can be seen in every level of companies. Moreover, it is might be one of the best ways to make staffs feel valuable as a quality pay check is one of the core factor of job satisfaction. For a job holder, a good salary with bonuses not only encourage to work hard but also makes them feel important. To cite an example, according to research made by Chicago University, achievable goals with bonuses is a pivotal factor for accelerating the employee's development.

On the other hand, this trend may create a sense of jealousy among the colleagues. Therefore, creating a process of voting among the workers for monthly or yearly award where the winner will receive a generous paycheck or the highest share of company profit may produce a better outcome. Due to public voting, mentioned method will decrease the disputes and everyone likely to maintain a good relationship with each other. For instance, a famous tech vendor named "Walton" follows this scheme to reward their top five candidates. As a result, a competitive and hardworking mindset can be seen in the industry.

In a nutshell, rewards play a vital role in job satisfaction. Addition of incentives for good performance is a well-known practice which works at a greater extent. Nevertheless, arranging awards through public voting with profit share is also a considerable alternative.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...s a pivotal factor for accelerating the employees development. On the other hand, thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22670807453 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09550069169 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.332416779 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196690725005 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564765311024 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478480821146 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113584057784 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273423754942 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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