More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
Many people nowadays tend to purchase goods and clothing from reputed retails. The ensured quality and longibility of the items are the main reasons for this preference. Although increment of this movement may advocate a monopoly of major brands, this is a praiseworthy development as it will create new employments and increase prosparity of the sector.
In this modern era, the taste and preference of citizens change frequently. Now, personnel favour to shop from renowned retails as they assure the quality and the longibility of their products. As a result, people can be more relaxed while shopping. By contrast, leading brands are much concerned to protect their image among the buyers therefore, the do not accept any decline in terms of standards. To paraphase, a recent "Nike" shoe had faced many complains from the users. Thus ,the company replaced them with others and removed that model from the market.
More and more pupils turning towards these branded shops can bring blessings for many. If the demand for products of a vendor rises, they will establish new workshops or industries. As new infrastructures will require new employees, various work opportunities will be evident. On the other hand, the growing interest towards brands will increase the competitions among them hence, a challenge to offer something more will always be there, this cicumstances will imporve the sector and market. To cite an example, the competative tendency of the two most popular vendors in shoe market "Nike" and "Addidas" has taken this sector to new heights in last five years. However, this movements can generate a monopoly of dominative manufactures on the contrary with proper government steps it can be avoided.
In a nutshell, people favor to purchase their items or appreals form renowned shops as they provide an assurance of standards. Therefore, to satisfy this growing demand, brands not only produce new employment opportunities but also plays a pivotal role to enhance the prosparity of the sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33950617284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99503602932 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5487874869 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145494121228 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483838264095 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518291795215 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862472658374 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012739371177 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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