Prevention is better than cure. Do you agree or disagree that out of the country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health and education and preventive measure
Many individuals assert that allocating a significant portion of the government's health budget should be concentrated in health promotion and disease prevention, instead of focusing on treatment. I Fully agree with these notion for some reason.
To begin with, spending government fund in educating the people about personal wellness and creating programs in preventing diseases engages the public to choose a healthier behavior. These change in attitude towards health reduces the risk of people developing chronic illnesses. For example, nowadays many individuals are more conscious on the food that they eat and perform daily exercises to avoid conditions such as hypertension and diabetes. These allows individual to live a fit and longer life.
Moreover, giving emphasis on disease prevention and health education also helps the country's economy by keeping people out of the hospital. This greatly reduces the government from spending for confinement and treatment. In the US, studies show that after an enhanced patient education and follow up by health professionals a noticeable decrease in readmission was noted. Consequently, government can put aside these saved funds for other programs and expenditures.
In summary, it is undeniably important for any governing body to set a buget for reasearch and giving aid for treatment of infirmity of its people. However, I hold the view that a bigger cut of these fund should be for teaching the public the value of health and prevention of diseases, for these will result in a population free from sickness and a healthier economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in summary, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60084033613 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2011650702 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600840336134 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1250564589 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261708176758 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897973622171 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822145462329 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171320533527 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057461353398 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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