"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
When it comes to diseases, two approaches are available, prevention and cure. Both measures are important in the respective circumstances. However, it is often not very practical to prevent before someone catches a diseases, most of the times even impossible. This is where research and treatment to cure come in.
It is clear that no one wants to have any disease in the first place. That is why there is this old saying that prevention is better than cure. But we have to keep in mind that it is almost impossible in many cases to prevent people from catching diseases. No matter how careful a person is does not guarantee that the individual will not be the victim of a disease. Researchers are constantly investigating the cures for extreme diseases, which is expensive without any doubt. But the results of those researches give us the fighting chance to cure. For example, no one can say that if someone abides by a certain lifestyle he/she will never have cancer. It can be seen from our own experiences. Even a common cold or fever cannot be predicted. So we have no other way but to rely on treatment methods and researches for cure.
There are certainly some cases where prevention is the most effective option at our disposal. An example could be AIDS, which is possible to prevent by being careful in our activities. There are some other diseases which are caused by unhealthy lifestyles. These are possible to prevent before they occur. But there are a lot more diseases that we cannot prevent before they occur, no matter how healthy lifestyle we lead. Some are even genetic, where we have nothing to do except trying to make the condition better.
So in conclusion, I think it is more viable option to run research for the purpose of cure, even if they costly. Because prevention is often not in our hand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disease' or simply 'diseases'?
Suggestion: a disease; diseases
...tical to prevent before someone catches a diseases, most of the times even impossible. Thi...
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Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e purpose of cure, even if they costly. Because prevention is often not in our hand. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in many cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73667711599 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62320828111 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526645768025 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2848237892 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6818181818 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172493212386 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566664598016 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472736624246 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106656478773 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022775607546 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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