Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime however up more effective solutions to produce people with the better education do you agree or disagree?
Despite prison sentences is the most popular method in most nation to combat,criminal issues a considerable number of people think that education is more effective to reduce their problem, but I completely disagree with it, because, we believe that both views have their own characteristics benefits to reducing problem of crime.
To commence with, I would assert that reason effective is dealing with criminals. The first reason that an individual who commits the offence must learn illegal actions have consequences. For example, murders rapists must sentenced in plethora of year in jail because of their behaviour. This means they will know about that they will face a loss liberty, social isolation and this connection with their family, relatives and friends if they carry on such wrongdoing.
On the other hand, I considered that education play a contemporary role in reducing crime. Firstly, youngsters should be taught about feature of law which influences on their lives. Having a wide range of knowledge about legislation those youngster are final prepared to keep away from this situation which may involve in offence and becoming a victim.To epitome, the students must learn about the driving and road safety rules. Secondly, behind prison bars education programs must aim provide a prisoners with skill and qualifications to find work and reintegrate back into society when they are released.
To recapitulate, I believe that prison sentence are one crucial weapon in fight against crime and I disagree that providing better education sole is a more effective solutions to decrease the crime rate.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youngster' or 'those youngsters'?
Suggestion: this youngster; those youngsters
...e range of knowledge about legislation those youngster are final prepared to keep away from th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...nvolve in offence and becoming a victim.To epitome, the students must learn about ...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...driving and road safety rules. Secondly, behind prison bars education programs mu...
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Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a prisoner' or simply 'prisoners'?
Suggestion: a prisoner; prisoners
...ars education programs must aim provide a prisoners with skill and qualifications to find w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81767912436 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643137254902 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3148134136 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223349750032 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801906604292 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931327943401 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154676033595 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929372481867 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , criminal
... popular method in most nation to combat,criminal issues a considerable number of people ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing problem of crime. To commence with, I would assert that reason effective is ...
^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and this connection with their family, relatives and friends if they carry on s...
^^
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide range of knowledge about legislation those youngster are final prepared to ke...
^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youngster' or 'those youngsters'?
Suggestion: this youngster; those youngsters
...e range of knowledge about legislation those youngster are final prepared to keep away from th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...nvolve in offence and becoming a victim.To epitome, the students must learn about ...
^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...driving and road safety rules. Secondly, behind prison bars education programs mu...
^^
Line 3, column 496, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a prisoner' or simply 'prisoners'?
Suggestion: a prisoner; prisoners
...ars education programs must aim provide a prisoners with skill and qualifications to find w...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81767912436 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643137254902 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3148134136 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223349750032 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801906604292 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931327943401 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154676033595 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929372481867 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.