The private hospital are making profits, the Advantages and disadvantages of getting into private hospitals.
health is wealth, the common philosophy of life. The first thing about human being is when they are healthier in their lives, and happier from their own lifestyle then they have a better energy and a self fulfillment for gaining a good sense of peace and love in their pursuit of life.
it is necessary to have a balanced health for Everyone. it is important to know that how you get it from various ways. we take every precautions and make sure that we don't get suffering from different type of illnesses, but sometimes, Apart from all the consequences, you probably get in touch with contagious diseases. In this instance, you have to go for doctors and practitioners, who is specialist in the significant profession and you won't able to pay the cost of their service, because of their high level of fee.
Generally, it's take place at the private hospitals, where you have to pay a lot of money and registration deposits as well, even before the treatment getting started. so patients need to know that there is both advantages and disadvantages available for the patients and their families.
The benefits of taking care of yourself through private hospitals are getting a better treatment than governments, specifically in India. you will get special treatment and daily check up plans as well. Other than that, your family also get good treatment and hospitality when they are with you, if you get admitted. you also have the facilities to get access to cafeteria for lunch and dinners, so you don't have to worry about food. However, there are some disadvantages of private health care providers; which is also important factor to consider when choosing a treatment. The consequences are often caused by the factors such as high deposits and money, health insurance risk which is sometimes not considered by the private hospitals. When you want to go for private hospitals than you should know about the policy of that health care and prevention process, after get into the hospital.
At the end, the private hospital should know that they are part nation, where they serve health facilities for every single day and for each person to get them affordable treatments. they have to recognize that their policies and prices are made in the favor of public as well and it is not for only ruled for profitable purpose, but it is also important to make sure that they are willing to pay attention towards the societal benefits too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88009592326 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65293290734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498800959233 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6493124474 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.705882353 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230744284882 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797659458322 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639499206321 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119721672352 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879218129091 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.