Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and g

Essay topics:

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The sharing of information in the academic world with the aspect of any subject like scientific research and business getting popular in recent years. while some of the information is too informative to not be shared often because it includes such valuable information, which could not be transmitted to anyone easily for sharing a purpose. I firmly believe that most of the information creates a void between the two people or two parties by disclosing the information without taking any earlier permission.

These days people share so many data related to the research for using to analyze the statistics to get the results. One of the Most proven research agency NASA shared news about finding the black hole, recently. This actually emphasizes that the necessary pieces of information shared widely. so it gives knowledge to the world about happenings and makes a variety of experiences for people. According to a study conducted by a news agency shows, people are generally get excited and happier by reading the new findings and sharing the facts into their lives daily with their beloved. It happens because it gives immense pleasure and satisfaction to everyone who involved in some purposeful activity.

On the other hand, It is quite obvious that the information or data related to privacy or involved any other crucial information not be shared freely because of the prohibition and as well because it is underpowered by the security. However, it also includes some of the factors related to copyright and duplicate which prove the increasing rate of crimes. This dictates the growing demand for cyber security as well.

In the conclusion, any type of information linkage to especially with research and business needs protecting by the security, and it is only shared to those people who take participation in it with the promise that they do not illegally show it before taking grant to do it. It binds everyone so people having a responsibility towards preparing any research to not to mention any faulty representations. And being aware of not to use biased and undefined information for any research purpose.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, well, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11461318052 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85050318871 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52435530086 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0101906756 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335645359131 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104195215525 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766557337975 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203083419034 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102944648602 0.056905535591 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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