By punishing murderers with the death penalty,society is also guilty of committing murder.therefore,life in prison is a better punishment for murderers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
you should write at least 250 words.
The issue whether the murderers should be punished with death penalty or not is a controversial one. Many people support the death penalty as a capital punishment and think that this is a vital way to establish peace and law in the world but there are lots of opinions against it. I support the death penalty for murderers if it's really necessary for prevailing peace but if there is any alternative way to give the criminals a chance to remorse and lead a civilized life again, and then they should be given it.
In today's society, life becomes very cruel. if we see a daily newspaper, then there should be an issue about murder or rape cases. Firstly, if society continues to believe in the idea 'blood for blood', what example will it give to the future generation? Crimes like murder and rape are not fixable, but perpetrators are definitely fixable. To illustrate, many murders occur as a self-defence and accident and the death penalty is not definitely the worthy of a trial for such people. Moreover, many atrocious criminals have changed and become good citizens and we should always focus on reforming criminals, not kill them like they did. What difference is there if both parties are guilty of committing murders?
Everybody deserves a second chance and putting the murderers isolated from the society to let them repent for what they did is a good enough punishment, in my opinion.
We should think about the convicted person's families and how their life will change if their close one is punished with the death penalty. Many developed countries like Finland and Norway have already abolished the death penalty and have set an example to be followed.
To conclude, for the humanities sake, we need to build a society where we do not act for vengeance but set an example for others while letting the perpetrators reform their lives and suffer from their prison sentence.
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...and suffer from their prison sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, so, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8549382716 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56878212277 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9342696815 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274832011622 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951458003095 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057685651367 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144598580118 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308980265013 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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