Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life, but others like to life in different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, mostly people change their preference of living according to their choices.As we live in competitive world and it is important to change ourselves according to situation.Some people think that to live in same place is good for them while other groups of people argue that living in different places help them to explore the other cultures and lifestyles. Both the argument need proper scrutiny before giving an opinion.
Going with first school of thought, they think that when people live in same place, they are more familiar with with the places around them as well as know their neighbors very well. So it helps them to adjust with environment quite easily. Apart from it, sometimes persons are emotionally attached with with these places because of their childhood memories. Due to this, they do not want to leave this area. Furthermore, it takes a lot time to settle in one place so it is hard to change it quickly.
However, other schools of thought argue that, people prefer to live in different area because of their overall development. Mostly people shift to other area due to their career as well as their personal growth. Moreover, in modern era everyone is in rush to achieve success and better life style so they move from rural to developed area where they get advanced and modern facilities. In addition to it, family disputes also create problem to live in same place or under same roof therefore persons prefer to live apart on other area.
According to me, when person live in same area for long time they know everything about that place and it help to adjust with other but it does not mean that people should not shift to new place ever. In my personal view, when we move to different places it help us to know more about other religious and culture.
To conclude, it is clear that living in different places both has their benefits. So, if we get better facilities in other area then we should shift there for better standard of living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76453488372 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35735381789 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5113208762 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.266666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33964193174 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116425294326 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863204146808 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199672586174 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856493773189 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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