Q18. Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Recently, the question of how to support emerging countries has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that practical help and advice for third world nations should take precedence over monetary support, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with the former stance. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that there are a number of advantages that can be derived from receiving financial aid do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that acquiring an astronomical amount of money from global foundations enables less-developed nations to build infrastructure helping them to invigorate economic growth, such as railways and roads. In addition, a myriad of citizens suffering from a lack of the availability of basic necessities, such as balanced meals and primary education, due to poverty are able to have an improved standard of living by receiving monetary support from global institutions.
My opinion, however, is that more emphasis should be placed on practical assistance and technical advice than monetary help. Perhaps the most compelling reason is that although it seems beneficial for developing countries to gain a vast sum of money from international foundations in the short term, relying on monetary support leads them to become more dependent on developed nations. Thus, there is a high possibility that emerging countries can be exploited by first world countries. Furthermore, the majority of less-developed countries are experiencing a high level of corruption. If they receive numerous pieces of invaluable advice from experts in international foundations, this phenomenon will be alleviated. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that receiving practical assistance and advice should be a top priority for the reasons discussed above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etary support from global institutions. My opinion, however, is that more emphas...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a careful manner" with adverb for "careful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that receivin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, third, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55828220859 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08499907873 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5945797219 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185480315759 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571692690039 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410536512705 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102022129459 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525095567704 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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