Recent studies have show that overweight people tend to eat junk food that the highest in the fat some people argue that increases in the price of such food will serve as to reduce the amount of overweight people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the 21st century. Obesity is the major concern among the society. therefore, some new studies explain that obesity is increasing due to the eating of junk foods. Whereas, other reckon that it would be better for the society to increase the price of these foods. So, this essay shall analyse both the above mention points along with the lucrative conclusion in the upcoming paragraph.
According to the first school of thoughts junk foods are very popular among the society because this is the highly demanded food everywhere. Firstly, most of the people are attracting towards the fatty foods because people likes the spices based foods which has calories and get the obesity problems. Secondly, these days most of the masses are living far away from their home and they are avoiding to make food by self, so people are order the food from outside as this food is available in the reasonable price. Further, children are like to eat junk foods like as, hamburgers, chawmein, pizzas and many more items because this foods are very palatable in the taste.
According to the second school of thoughts, there are many points which describes that junk foods should be expensive that helps to cut the demand in the markets. The prime one is that, authorities should increase the price of the fatty foods which helps to reduce the popularity among the society and people are starting to avoid the demand of this foods. Furthermore, governments as well as some health organisations should take some mutual efforts to create the awareness among the society about the harmful impact of these foods so people get to know about it.
To conclude, after a many thoughts and deliberation it is true to say that, " Healthy minds lives into the healthy body". So people should focus on their health and starting to take care of themself which helps to cut the amount of overweight people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90031152648 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36535801256 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510903426791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8399460988 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256982504244 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850364852014 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618893777717 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139542540763 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525126595657 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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