In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative.
The structure of family and its responsibility has witnessed a change in this contemporary times. These changes are in the form of its constitution and the increasing number of dual-income families. In my opinion, this development is a positive one.
Firstly, in time past, family is made up of a father, mother and children, where the father acts as the breadwinner, the mother caters for the children at home. However, presently, it is not uncommon to see families becoming dual-income. In other words, both parents are employed to provide for the families, while children are left with nannies at home. In addition, same-sex and single-sex marriages are trending. By this I mean, an individual forming a family by adopting children or two persons of the same gender constituting one.
These changes are now accepted in our society because of its benefits. To begin, due to the economic state of some countries, it is extremely difficult for a single person to provide for the family, so when both parents work, family income would increase which would in turn improve its economic status. Furthermore, since anyone can form a family, either single parent or same-sex parent, it would be of benefit to parents later on. This is because, in most developing countries, there is no provision for care of the older citizens, therefore, not having your own children, whether biological or adopted would mean living an undesirable life after retirement. These changes are therefore welcomed as an advantage.
To conclude, at present, families have differed in terms of their make up and role, since both parents work and anyone can form it, it has benefited both the parents and children alike.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, i mean, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10035842294 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82036722681 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7168925386 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145461626934 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662263484379 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636420696702 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103489307135 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661975873376 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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