Research has shown that the transportation of products and people is the main source of pollution Some people believe the government should be in charge of this while others believe it is the fault of individuals Discuss both views and give your opinion | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people is the main source of pollution. Some people believe the government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals.

Discuss both views and give your opinion

One of the main reasons of pollution points directly to the carbon emissions from gas vehicles that are used for transporting people and products.If there are lesser vehicles on the road , it would be easier to control pollution. The next paragraphs explain the reasons for pollution

The government has created a systematic method of transportation for people and good using transport such as trains , buses and cabs. These have been created to give the public a cheaper way of travelling throughout the city .Public transport can be used by both children and adults.But public transportation can’t be counted as a reliable and safe source of transport due to various factors . For example buses are famously known for being crowded and unsafe and produces a lot of smoke due to improper maintenance

Whereas , people nowadays prefer to use their own vehicle for their transportation as it is easier and more reliable.People ride or drive to their schools or offices without having to worry about missing a train or bus. The added benefit of comfort is also a major factor of people preferring their own mode of transport. For example , people drive to their office in leisure , in the comfort of their own cars , rather than missing the bus and getting delayed

Overall , the research proves that there is pollution being produced by transportation by public or private transport. In my opinion , the government should be held responsible for not providing an effective system of transport maintenance and upkeep that causes people to opt for other solutions. If the current transport system is improved in quality ,there will be no need for any other vehicles to be present on the road

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... and good using transport such as trains , buses and cabs. These have been created...
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...er way of travelling throughout the city .Public transport can be used by both chi...
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...their own mode of transport. For example , people drive to their office in leisure...
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...isure , in the comfort of their own cars , rather than missing the bus and getting...
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...than missing the bus and getting delayed Overall , the research proves that there...
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...blic or private transport. In my opinion , the government should be held responsib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85070924681 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562724014337 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4950978822 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.5 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226274179876 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116663826095 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300686476508 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142882530006 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485588386259 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for example, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments