Hosting olympics or world cup is beneficial for the host country. What is your opinion on this
Hosting Olympics and the world cup will definitely reap more benefits to the host countries in many aspects most likely in social, economical and also in maintaining and promoting international relationships. Tourism is most likely developed at a faster rate in these countries who are hosting these big Olympics and World cup events.
To begin with, i totally agree with the topic on how countries obtaining more benefits from from hosting the international events like the Olympics and World cup. As most of the international visitors who visit the country will reap more profit to the host country by sales of the countries own product thereby improving its economy. Furthermore, few foreign tourists who visit that host country for the first time would most likely visit the country again to understand more about their culture and ways which is proved from the survey conducted for the past 20 years in the host countries conducting these Olympics and World cup events.
For example, the survey conducted by the international society of tourism on average spending and the international tourists at india which conducted the common wealth games in the year 2013, the tourism in india has subsequently increased thrice the normal amount after india successfully hosted the commonwealth games.
To conclude, I can say confidently that the above points will prove my support on how host countries benefit from conducting Olympics and world cup events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25213675214 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76390024578 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7080805358 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.571428571 104.977214359 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4285714286 20.9669160288 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366206136017 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211708387482 0.0925447433944 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723471916708 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237846121642 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106334240956 0.0609392437508 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 12.6369458128 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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