Research indicates that characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Personality of human and efficient factor of it is problem of controversy. Since characteristics were inherited to us by our ancestors, some people think they play important role in our life and not to be underestimated whereas other have different idea.
Inherited characteristics act as an infrastructure to personality, while experiences can help it to be more developed and flourished. Infancy know nothing from prejudice, bias and etc. His parent, society and environment can make his personality. For instance, a Jewish baby who was bringing up by Christian family are more likely to have their habit and temper. Also it should be noted that unlike his biological parent, he will be Christian.
Blood is very important. This is the sentence you might hear from people who swear by direct relationship between personality and inherited characteristics. They claim every trait we have is from our family which mean that there is no burgeoning for person in his life. It is very dated idea that belong to past era when every family belong to some sort of class dependent of their social position and wealth. For example, in Sassanian era when Khosroparviz ordered in Iran, people categorized in some classes and they can have a better class. Farmer must be former for ever and he is not allowed to do better job.
To wrap it up, I thinks human abilities must not be underestimated and it is unfair judge his personality by his blood. Both, together would have their impact on the personality, but experiences can promote our personality in good way. Also it should be noted that they can act on other side do not promote our personality at all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...fancy know nothing from prejudice, bias and etc. His parent, society and environment can...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... likely to have their habit and temper. Also it should be noted that unlike his biol...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ed to do better job. To wrap it up, I thinks human abilities must not be underestima...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...an promote our personality in good way. Also it should be noted that they can act on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9247311828 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00058874933 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.41584756 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207787853571 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641765501507 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755967340852 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13511742302 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384748709224 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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