Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison would commit crimes when set free? What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
Nowadays, the number of recidivists are increasing, which causes seriously calamitous results to society. This essay will discuss two main causes of this phenomenon and suggest some methods to defuse the situation.
There are various reasons why most offenders relapse into criminal behavior after being released, two of which are having difficulty in finding an employment and negative long-term effect during imprisionment. First, the majority of employers do not tend to hire people who used to be thrown in jail because they think those malefactors are potential to reoffend such as stealing company’s cash or harming other staffs. When those deliquents are not givens stable job, they can not earn for their living. Therefore, they will commit crimes again in order to get money and save their lives. Second, when we leave criminals in an environment which is full of hatred, negativity and violence such as prison, they are obviously hard to rehabilitate because they get used to brutal acts over punishment time.
However, there are numerous measures that government should take into consideration to address this issue, including providing criminals vocational schemes and reducing violence in jail. As mentioned, the majority of offenders relapse into crime due to lack of money, so government might organize some training courses related to specific jobs such as plumbers, electricians, etc to help them get jobs after being released. When they have salary to meet their demand, they will lose their motives to commit crimes again. Moreover, during the time of being punished, delinquents should be behaved in positive way, which means they should be educated what is right or wrong and encouraged to rehabilitate.
In conclusion, there are many reasons leading to the increase in recidivists such as finding tough to get jobs and adverse impact of prison environment. Nevertheless, the government should consider providing criminals vocational schemes or reducing negative effect of imprisonment to defuse this trend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44303797468 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79401528106 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6117857519 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.307692308 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170125327929 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548262573774 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273797452228 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877350933131 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491424852677 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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