In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In recent decades, many urban citizens prefer living alone or in nuclear families to living in joint families, which becomes a controvesial issue among society. From my viewpoint, I believe this phenomenon is positive because of some specific reasons.
First, civic parents are aware of their responsibility and their role in shaping children’s personalities, so they often spend time taking care of their kids by themselves. Children in nuclear families are more close-knit with their parents than those in extended families because they can directly share their problems and have frank discussions with parents about their problems. In joint families, parents are too busy with their businesses, so they tend to rely on other family members to look after their kids. Sometimes children can find it hard to share their issues with grandparents, aunts or uncles, which is potential to cause some metal illnesses including depression and autism. Second, when children are grown up, they need more privacy, particularly private rooms, living in small family units will ensure all members have enough space to enjoy their personal lives.
However, there are several negative impacts on people's lives when living alone or in nuclear families, including insecurity of children and financial problems. In small family units, both husband and wife are busy earning a living outside, then children are neglected and looked after by the servants. They might feel lonely and unsafe due to care deficiency from parents. Also, either husband or wife is incapable of working, life will become harder because of the lack of money, which seldom happens in extended families because people can support each other. Moreover, when living alone, people can face some disadvantages such as no one will take care of them when they are sick.
In conclusion, whether urban people should live alone, in nuclear families or in joint families depends on their demands and living conditions. In my opinion, I still believe living alone or in small family units is a positive trend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26747720365 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55549179919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0311103508 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.785714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261295506472 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10537753706 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092853969759 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201052133651 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981794312553 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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