The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures, This money should be used in new housing and road development. Do you agree or disagree?
The authorities are spending enormous money to rebuild old building hence lead to an argument whether the fund should used in construct new street and building or continuing reconstructed the old things. In this essay, i will represent my opinion about this situation.
On the one hand, restoration an ancient architecture help our country to protect culture building. Inheritance is the things represent for national faces. When other tourist visits one nation, they excited about finding that nation traditional, so aged building always is their destination. Due to, each individual need to have a responsibility to keep and conserve the relics they have.
On the other hand, with the path of development over the world, the union should consider on pedestrian accommodation such as condominium, house, street,... They need a comfortable place to have the best effective work. They earned money to receive things they deserved. Walk on a beautiful lane, let their children play in a safety park, lived in a cozy house with family and experienced the best things they have made. If the country construction delicate, your country seemed to have a intensive growth.
Naturally, protect inheritance is importance but looking to news things and continuing improve the country construction to make citizen have a better life get comeuppance prioritize. Because, when people feel easy their spirit is higher, so they will work effectively.
In conclusion, I believe that government should concentrated on advancement of news construction. Enjoy the pleasant beside used it to protect old building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.408 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0262848511 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.065911231 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126449436979 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397315603445 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504804087329 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795368652153 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735923460147 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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