As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
A person can live longer and life expectancy is also increasing because of advancement in the medical sector. I believe that there are more advantages to living long but drawbacks cannot be neglected.
The positive effect of live longer life is they will get a chance to fulfil their dreams. In their early age period, they spent their all-time to earn money and settle. so they do not get enough time to pursue their desire. when they become old the responsibilities are decreased.so, these the stage when they get live their life. Recently, the survey published by the Gujarat government shows that travellers who complete the world tour were mostly age above 60.
if people live longer, they will have a chance to serve the nation and help to raise the countries growth. Some scientists are so knowledgable that comparison with other humans is worthless. if these people live longer, the rate of growth of the country will at the ceiling level. This is also true for the grandparents because they have a huge amount of information and experience related to life. if they die early, people do not learn their experience.
Although, health is the biggest issue when the person becomes old. problems like arthritis and asthma are common among all people after a certain age which leads to lots of stress for their family members. In addition, money problems are also created due to they depend on their savings. if the saving is over, they become a burden on the family.
to sum up, I feel that having a longer life is advantageous if a person is mentally and physically healthy.so, such group people can enjoy life by fulfilling their dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i feel, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89399293286 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56375461346 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7267227001 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4705882353 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128984499857 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445321729438 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040566017211 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763315850999 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229675699055 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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