Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often believed that prosperous nations should let jobs for talented and wise workers belonging to under developing countries. In my perspective, I completely agree with this suggestion as it brings economic development and develops a mutual understanding environment also teach people the overall development of particular nation between rich and poor countries. This essay will espouse my view with relevant example in favor of my argument.
To begin with, an economic reason is a prime reason that any country becomes poor. If well-skilled citizens of deprived regions are migrating to prosperous countries, where they can learn and gain experiences and could bring back their experience to origin land for improvement. As a result, there will be progress in the field of economics. Incite one example, thousands of Nepali workers are a workforce in different parts of the world due to which the economy of Nepal on the balanced side.
Furthermore, open immigration and work opportunity to develop coöperation between the two nations. People can get interact with the culture and customs of other nations as well as follows the trend of development of such nations. As a result, they learn how to develop a nation. Obviously, people can learn the way the infrastructure of developed countries had constructed and through which they are utilizing the natural resources for the overall development of a country which ensures people of poor countries to follow such developmental work in their native land. Moreover, this relation brings peace and serenity all over the world and minimizes an occurrence of war. For instance, India and Nepal have opened boundaries which helps people to work anywhere as per their interest and prosper brotherhood between two nations.
To recapitulate, I agree that third world countries people should be allowed to work because it grows economic of poor countries and increases co-operation between developed and poor countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etween developed and poor countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38585209003 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95618902752 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6598125728 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15281468045 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050008018587 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641852926015 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117405601351 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626612073628 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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