Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world, although there are a number of countries became richer and more affluent following the development and advancement in technology, there are still some nations who remain poor. Therefore, some people assert that rich countries have the obligations to offer jobs to those talented and wise workers who come from the poor countries which I strongly agree with.
There are several reasons which are useful to support my view. To begin, the act of allowing jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees from poor countries by affluent nations is considered to be an ef...
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not only it will help the poor countries to tackle poverty and starvation problems, but also will help the rich nations
Description: Not only...but also is not used properly. can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: As proverb said, kill two birds with one stone, this action is believed to be beneficial to both sides, not only it will help the poor countries to tackle poverty and starvation problems, but also will help the rich nations to continue to prosper and flourish in the decades to come.
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